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Friday, 18 August 2017

Descriptive Writing by Luka

Kia orana fellow bloggers, my class has been doing character description for writing - hope you enjoy my post!



THE INVISIBLE SLICE

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The  invisible slices name  speaks for itself. Although it sounds like it's only abilities are to turn itself invisible and saw with its long and sturdy tail like overgrown wing. It also can shrink to as small as a mouse and  spits lime acid. it can slither ninety km an hour without stopping! And it’s as heavy as three mega sharks! Never get close to this mystical hybrid it has the heart of a tyrannosaurus and the skin of a chameleon

3 comments:

  1. Aloha Luka!
    I like how you made a second copy to make an even better piece of writing.Great job on using different sentence starters like Although. By the way where did you get the idea invisible slice?

    From Sienna

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  2. Hi luka, I liked how you used interesting adjectives when you were writing. You made my day with that writing. How did you get the idea of 3 mega sharks what is a mega shark?

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  3. Hi Luka your story is amazing what does the invisble eat

    from Blake

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