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Friday, 1 September 2017

The star tree by Pax and Luka DASH?

This week we have been learning about DASH? paragraphs for adventure stories. D = describe the settingA = use actionS = use speechH = describe how the character is feeling? = use a cliffhanger or rhetorical questionWe wrote collaboratively and used a writing frame for this learning task, then we wrote our own paragraphs today.





Luka and Pax sped into the dreadful forest, leaving no fear behind them. Suddenly, there was a sound coming from a nearby tree. “What was that” whispered Luka. A look of fear filled his face. Pax and Luka strolled towards the light. What was it…